ESSAY 1: PREWRITING 2

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CRYING HAS BEEN USED TO EXPRESS MANY EMOTIONS SUCH AS HAPPINESS, SADDNESS, OR ANYWHERE IN BETWEEN SINCE THE WORLD BEGAN. THIS WET EXPRESSION IS PROVEN TO RELIEVE STRESS, PAIN, OR TO BETTER SHOW SOMEONE HOW ONE FEELS. IN OUR SOCIETY, TEARS ARE MORE ACCEPTED BY WOMEN RATHER THAN MEN. SO GIVEN THIS FACT, ONE WOULD BELIEVE THAT I, BEING A YOUNG WOMAN HAVE HAD MANY OCCASIONS WHERE I HAVE CRIED. HOWEVER, THE LAST TIME I CRIED WAS IN JANUARY OF 2001.

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THIS MAN THAT GRACED MY LIFE WITH HIS PRESENCE WITH EVERY ENCOUNTER WAS THE BEST THING THAT WALKED INTO MY LIFE. BUT JUST LIKE THAT, HE BECAME THE WORST THING WITH ONE PHONE CALL ON THAT SATURDAY MORNING. HIS WONDERFUL ASPECTS MADE ME WANT HIM HERE ON EARTH FOREVER, BUT INSTEAD LEFT ME WITH A HOLE IN MY HEART. THIS EVENT QUICKLY BECAME THE WORST POSSIBLE THING TO EVER HAPPEN TO ME NOW, AND IN THE FUTURE. THEREFORE, I HAVE NO REASON TO EXPRESS WHAT WE CALL CRYING ABOUT ANYTHING IN LIFE ANYMORE.