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-Thesis Statement=positive example, optimistic, relaible
Paragraph 2:Positive example
-Graduated from college
-still in school
-strives to have the best
-has all her stuff together
-look up to her b/c her examples are positive
-trust her to speak, act positively
Paragraph 3:Optimistic
-always finds the good in the worst situation
-"it will get better" "be ok"
-when something isnt good in my life, she tells me what to do to make it better
-dosent dwell on the negative
Paragraph 4: Reliable
-always comes through for me when i need it
-tells me the truth
-never let anyone down
-trust her word
-mom kicked me out/locked me out of the house, she was the first person I called
-came through when mom didnt
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